-Malavika M Nair
In the frozen pit of my heart
you hear the silence,
feel the darkness I have endured.
Once a gay and spirited soul,
now is a miserable hole.
Nothing grows here.
I have turned into a graveyard,
where only dead persists.
You can neither feel me
nor love me.
I am lifeless and blue.
Nothing can warm my heart,
which has been stabbed by stake.
Only the bruises remain.
I am dead.
But my epitaph read: I am alive.
Copywright © Malavika M Nair
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Avial 
4th line? Your handwriting is beautiful
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Thank you so much 😍
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Nicely penned Malavika.. what a handwriting…
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Thanks alot!
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Hi , I have nominated you for the Real Neat blog Award. Please refer # https://mytravelcsp.wordpress.com/2018/10/23/real-neat-blog-award/
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Thank you so much!!
Means alot.. 😍
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You are Welcome 🙂
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Hey, I have nominated you for the sunshine blogger award 😊.
https://onelife513532705.wordpress.com/2018/10/03/the-sunshine-blogger-award/
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Thank you so much!
Means alot!!!
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You deserve it ☺
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Awaiting your creative work, I know that you are busy with exams
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Uh. So good that it hurts ❤
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❤Thank you so much!
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The image and the words were very effective. Draws you in….
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Thank you so much!
Really humbled..
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This is intense! By the bye, you have a beautiful handwriting 🙂
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Thank you so much!
I am humbled by your words!😍
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The pleasure is all mine 🙂
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SHI VA means no thing , nothingness is from where creation started, so death is only a start, wish you another poem to come from nothingness
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Ok Acha
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Thank you so much for the flowers!!
Made my day 💝🌹
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interesante, y original
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Thank you so much!
Means alot 💝💝
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The only deadline I acknowledge is when I’m dead. Reflections on death of any sort invoke and have the potential to become self-fulfilling.
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Thank you so much for commenting!!
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Hey malvika….
It was amazing…
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Thank you soo much! 💛❤
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😊
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Dark and intense…wonderful!!
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Thank you so much!! 💚💜
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😊💛
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Its like an illusion that we are alive..it was really touching🙇♀️
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Thank you so much!
Mean alot 💙🌹
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Beautifully written!!!!
:):)
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Thank you so much!!!
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Nothing can warm my heart,
which has been stabbed by stake.
Only the bruises remain.
I am dead.
But my epitaph read: I am alive
I got goosebumps, when I read your poem. Very Appreciable lines♥
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Thank you soo much 💝❤
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Oh my Malavika. Very intense indeed
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Thank you so much KJ. 💛💙
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This is absolute talent
By the way I did three book reviews for blog friends and have resumed on my book.
Let’s be active on Book Writer’s Club
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Thank you so much!
Ok sir
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Nice you do all your own pictures. So was that red die.
Side note, you have no like button or is that delibeate ?
Yes ur hand writing is beautiful..
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Yeah I did it using dye.
No, I have like button, let me check it.
Thank you so much for the compliment 😍💙
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Beautiful words all over, especially of the epitaph 💐
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Thank you so much! ❤💙💚💛💜
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Your handwriting is so beautiful. And the red hands in it mysterious — the last paragraph is absolutely intriguing. Thanks! 🙂
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Thank you so much for commenting!
Really happy that you noticed them 💙❤💜
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Keep smiling! 🙂 And happily alive. 🙂
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U too please keep smiling 😀.
I am alive 😂😍
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he!he! 🙂 So happy to see you. 🙂
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A wonderful read👍🏻
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Thank you so much! 🌹
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My Pleasure Malavika!😊
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Dark ,but very very impressively penned 👏💯
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Thank you so much 😍
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Pleasure always for beautiful writings like dis 😉🎀
&
Ur name is so cute like u Malavika
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Thank you!
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That handwriting. ❤
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Thank you so much ❤
Feeling happy..
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😃😃
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That was good! Coincidences happen every now and then.
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Wonderfully dark and gothic!
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Thank you so much! 😍
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Dark and nice , congrats
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Thank you so much!
Means alot!!
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👍👍👍👍😘😘😘😘 a big kiss from Spain
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Thank you 😃🌹
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Dark and impressive!
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Thank you so much!
What a coincidence I was just reading your poem.😃
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My reply ended up somewhere else!
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Haha… It doesn’t matter.😂
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